looo 5 stars for imagination
looo 5 stars for imagination
This is a bit too "Anime" for my liking lol, the lines are cheezy, but the japanese Voice actors do make it sound... allright... I guess. I loved the animation quality 10/10 for that, it must have taken a looonnnggg time to achieve that level of animation. I wanted to see at least the start of the fight but you just haaadd to go "Anime" and end it at the good part lol. I liked the suspense.
Overall it's a high quality generic styled Anime.
I liked it
Instead of "It has not gone as I thought", you could say "That didn't go the way that I thought it would"... it just sounds better. your pronunciation is good, I love the Russian accent. I Hope that helps. It was a good for your first animation on newgrounds. good job :) n_n
Thank you very much! That type of comments help me a lot! Thanks, I'll remember that next time ^_^.
#YOLO, BITCHES looool. Great work
I like the ambition, animation quality, realism (to some extent) and choice of music
My critique:
The animation is a little laggy (just enough to be noticeable) and voice acting needs work... maybe add a little more personality and emotion to some characters. It seems... borderline robitic at times
I hope I see more from you. 3.5/4 stars
"Common knowledge" isn't always so common, It just depends on what people have learned during their lifetime, you can't fault someone for not having acess to information we call "basic". Nice animation
Thanks dude.
My favourite bit was 3:28 - 3:37 that animation there was top quality, good work. But for the rest of..... It was.... meh... obviously DBZ Brolly inspired, it had a few anatomy issues, sound effects (including voice acting) could have been better chosen but I'm guessing that's because you didn't have enough time.... yeah I'm not going to lecture you on my opinion. I'm not marking this, I'll leave that to your lecturer lol but I like it keep it up, can't wait to see more
Thanks a bunch! I appreciate it!
I like it. I was expecting something epic for the final round. Oh well nicely done
The gun at 0:17 looks like a socom from mgs1. This is looking good though, keep it up
3:30 Cameo!! XD That just made my day, nice first episode, I can't wait to see how you improve in the future.
Love animation, love music, love art
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