Although I have my pet peeves about the animation I think it went pretty well for a first episode. It has everything I need in it so that the story can progress with a wide range of possibilities. I've learned a lot from it

Episode 2 will be 100% better... ok maybe not 100% but it will be better. A couple of scenes are already done. If anyone can tell me, would you prefer it without the subtitles or with the subtitles

Anyway check out episode 1 here
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/608591